Part three is done to my current level of satisfaction. My whole plan for this Jeremiah story foundered several months ago when I found logical holes in this portion, and since it's integral to subsequent storylines I had to find a way of fixing the holes without altering the core events. I couldn't even look at it for months, but I think I've fixed it now, or anyway it's 80% improved. It's also 22,066 words, so I'm too mentally exhausted to feel any of the happiness I expected at reaching its finalish draft stage.
Anyway, boat's back on course so someday I will be free of this thing.
Anyway, boat's back on course so someday I will be free of this thing.
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Date: 2023-05-08 02:02 am (UTC)Also, once I'm closer to the second, still-unwritten half (I'm hoping that will be toward the end of this year) I am planning to do a full rewatch of Jeremiah and will be writing an excessive amount of text for that as I go. Obviously, your thoughts would be very welcome.
Really though, just by being interested in the end result, you've got me feeling way more inspired and optimistic about the endeavor.
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